homework
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Why do you think people like to listen to gossip?
I think people feel exciting emotion by listening other\'s gossip.They may consider themselves like special one who know other secret.
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Why do you think people like to listen to gossip?
I think people feel exciting emotion by listening other\'s gossip.
>> I think people feel excited by listening to gossip.
OR: I believe that listening to other people\'s gossip causes people to experience exciting emotions.
OR: I believe that listening to other people\'s gossip causes people to experience exciting emotions.
They may consider themselves like special one who know other secret.
>> Correct!
OR: They may consider themselves to be special individuals who are entitled to other secrets.
OR: They may consider themselves to be special individuals who are entitled to other secrets.
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