homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) My friend is good at playing volleyball.
2) She complains of bullying.
3) They are afraid of losing the match.
4) She doesn't feel like working on the computer.
5) We are looking forward to going out at the weekend.
I went to the public library near my house after work.
Actually the library is not close. It takes to me for 30 min on foot.
By the way, I had to return some books and I wanted to borrow another one.
The loan period is for 2 weeks but it is too short to read a book.
I couldn't finish to read the books that I borrowed for loan period.
The book returned can't borrow the day again and can't extend the pepriod.
One day pass, it can be borrowed.
I go to library every Wednesday, come to think of it.
I hope that I return the book that I finish to read next week.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], happy Thursday!
Thank you once again for the composition..:)
Job well done on your homework Miss. [Name]..^^
And I\'m happy that despite of your busy schedule, you still manage to read some books, that\'s very impressive!
Because in my case, I really really hate reading books, kkkk..
Anyway, I will be talking to you again later in our class Miss. [Name]..:*
Teacher Cam^^
1) My friend is good at playing volleyball. >>correct2) She complains of bullying. >>correct3) They are afraid of losing the match. >>correct4) She doesn\'t feel like working on the computer. >>correct5) We are looking forward to going out at the weekend.>>correctI went to the public library near my house after work.
>>correctActually the library is not close. It takes to me for 30 min on foot.
>>Actually the library is not close and it took me 30 minutes to go there by foot.By the way, I had to return some books and I wanted to borrow another one.
>>correctThe loan period is for 2 weeks but it is too short to read a book.
>>correctI couldn\'t finish to read the books that I borrowed for loan period.
>>I couldn\'t finish reading the books that I borrowed for the load period.The book returned can\'t borrow the day again and can\'t extend the pepriod.
>>The returned book can\'t be borrowed at that same day and it\'s also impossible to extend the loan period.One day pass, it can be borrowed.
>>But after one day, you can borrow the book again.I go to library every Wednesday, come to think of it.
>>Come to think of it, I go to the lirary every Wednesday.I hope that I return the book that I finish to read next week.
>>I hope that I could return the book that I finished next week.
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