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2023-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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The advantage of making a phone call is that you can ask how your friends are doing from far away. And the point is that simple tasks can be completed over the phone without the hassle of meeting in person. I like that I can comfortably consult with the person who inquires over the phone even if I am not at the center outside of class hours during the center operation. The downside of a phone call is that you can misinterpret your emotions by misinterpreting the tone of the other person since you only talk with your voice. For example, if the other person is tired and the tone is blunt, it can be mi[이름]derstood that the conversation with me is in a bad mood.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Eliana!
Thank you once again for this. To be honest I prefer video calls over phone calls when I am talking with my friends because you can see the sincerity of a person through their face and you get tp relieve the feeling of missing them. How can we live without technology in our lives? Safe day ahead!
Aki~

The advantage of making a phone call is that you can ask how your friends are doing from far away.
>>> CORRECT!

And the point is that simple tasks can be completed over the phone without the hassle of meeting in person.
>>> CORRECT! 

I like that I can comfortably consult with the person who inquires over the phone even if I am not at the center outside of class hours during the center\'s operation.
>>> CORRECT!

The downside of a phone call is that you can misinterpret your emotions by misinterpreting the tone of the other person since you only talk with your voice.
>>> CORRECT!

For example, if the other person is tired and the tone is blunt, it can be mi[이름]derstood that the conversation with me is in a bad mood.
>>> CORRECT!

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