Homework🥰
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Jewel.
It’s sunny day but too cold due to blow strong wind.
I will do overtime work, tonight.
But I’m happy now.
I finished my homework.
Have a nice day. 🤗
강사 첨삭
Hello, Stella! I think I can feel you and your sorrow. I felt like I was in the same situation as you at times. Anyway, we should handle this with strength because we are not just wives—we are mothers. ^^ Thank you for your honest insights. I appreciate it a lot.
~T. Jewel
He might have many good qualities.
>>My husband might have many good qualities.
OR
>>My husband probably has good qualities.
>>My husband probably has good qualities.
However, as you know, We could be faced on disapointing points in our spouse\'s behaviors after getting married.
>>However, as you know, we could face disappointing aspects of our spouse\'s behavior after getting married.
I think many people have a kind of this period at least once since they had got married.
>>I think many people go through this kind of period at least once after getting married.
It\'s time to come to me, recently a few years.
>>It has been happening to me in the past few years.
I know that no one could be perfect on everything including me.
I know that no one could be perfect on everything including me.
>>I know that no one can be perfect at everything, including me.
But I think he didn\'t try to understand and listen to me.
>>But I think he didn’t try to understand me or listen to me.
I sometimes feel like not to exsist my husband, but he is only his mother\'s son.
>>I sometimes feel like I don’t exist to my husband, but to him, he is only his mother’s son.
So, I didn\'t want to admire anything about him when I cought his advantages or good qualities.
>>So, I didn’t want to admire anything about him even when I noticed his advantages or good qualities.
However, It\'s not good for my family, even also I do.
>>However, it’s not good for my family, or for me either.
My son likes his father and laughs a lot with him.
>>My son likes his father and laughs a lot when he\'s with him.
He should be a good father.
>>CORRECT
I might be that I just had fell in grumpy mind.
>>I might have just been feeling grumpy.
OR
>>Maybe I was just in a grumpy mood.
>>Maybe I was just in a grumpy mood.
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