Homework 🦋
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When you’re feeling stressed, what’s your go-to way to relax or take care of yourself?
When I’m feeling stressed, I usually write about something since I read a book.
The book is for kids.
The title may be ‘Let’s do this when you’re angry.’.
I was very angry to my husband.
He didn’t understand me when I told repeatly again.
I couldn’t relax my mind, but I had to read a book for my son because of sleeping.
I was very empressed that sentence
‘ Let’s write about it, when you’re feeling some depressed’
I feel relax after doing this.
So, I bought a book which is transcription.
I usually write the letters when I’m feeling stressed.
Have a nice day.
See you tommorow. 🤗
강사 첨삭
Hi, Stella! I think this is a good way to relieve stress. ^^ I am glad you find it very useful! Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Jewel
When I’m feeling stressed, I usually write about something since I read a book.
When I’m feeling stressed, I usually write about something since I read a book.
>>When I’m feeling stressed, I usually write about it after learning this method from a book I read.
The book is for kids.
The book is for kids.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>It\'s a children\'s book.
The title may be ‘Let’s do this when you’re angry.’.
>>It\'s a children\'s book.
The title may be ‘Let’s do this when you’re angry.’.
>>The title might be ‘Let’s Do This When You’re Angry\'.
I was very angry to my husband.
I was very angry to my husband.
>>Once, I was very angry at my husband.
He didn’t understand me when I told repeatly again.
He didn’t understand me when I told repeatly again.
>>He didn’t understand me when I told him repeatedly.
I couldn’t relax my mind, but I had to read a book for my son because of sleeping.
I couldn’t relax my mind, but I had to read a book for my son because of sleeping.
>>I couldn’t relax my mind, but I had to read a book for my son to help him sleep.
I was very empressed that sentence
I was very empressed that sentence
>>I was very impressed by a sentence that goes like this.
‘ Let’s write about it, when you’re feeling some depressed’
‘ Let’s write about it, when you’re feeling some depressed’
>>\'Let’s write about it when you’re feeling a bit depressed.\'
I feel relax after doing this.
I feel relax after doing this.
>>I feel relaxed after doing this.
So, I bought a book which is transcription.
So, I bought a book which is transcription.
>>So, I bought a book that is a transcription.
I usually write the letters when I’m feeling stressed.
I usually write the letters when I’m feeling stressed.
>>CORRECT
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