Homework
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The place I never want to go back to is the apartment I used to live in.
Because when I lived there, the neighbors I lived downstairs were so nasty and intimidating.
The couple downstairs often warned us to be quiet, saying that we were running and making too much noise even during our absence.
However, we were not at home on a trip on the weekend, and even at home, the children made rather than running around, the children went to bed at 9 o\'clock, the groom came home late, and I sat down to cook or sew.
No matter how much I explained that it was not my house, they did not understand or admit that they were looking for someone to vent their anger on.
The two years I lived as neighbors with them were so terrible.
They were the madmen of our apartment.
My family rented the apartment for 2 years, saved up a little more money and gave up the plan to buy the apartment 2 years later and moved to a happy duplex.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Eliana!
When you shared your homework about your previous apartment, I found it very beautiful and it seems like there was no problem there until I read this. I guess there is no such perfect neighborhood. This is where also our characters are being molded to show what kind of person will you be in facing those challenges :)
thank you for sharing! Have a good day!
Aki~
The place I never want to go back to is the apartment I used to live in.
>>> CORRECT!
Because when I lived there, the neighbors I lived downstairs were so nasty and intimidating.
>>> Because when I lived there, the neighbors who lived downstairs were so nasty and intimidating.
The couple downstairs often warned us to be quiet, saying that we were running and making too much noise even during our absence.
>>> CORRECT!
However, we were not at home on a trip on the weekend, and even at home, the children made rather than running around, the children went to bed at 9 o\'clock, the groom came home late, and I sat down to cook or sew.
>>> However, we were not at home because we were on a trip on the weekend, and even if we were at home, our children went to bed at 9 o\'clock, my husband came home late, and I sat down to cook or sew.
No matter how much I explained that it was not my house, they did not understand or admit that they were looking for someone to vent their anger on.
>>> CORRECT!
The two years I lived as neighbors with them were so terrible.
>>> I lived with them as neighbors for two years and they were so terrible.
They were the madmen of our apartment.
>>> CORRECT!
My family rented the apartment for 2 years, saved up a little more money, and gave up the plan to buy the apartment 2 years later and moved to a happy duplex.
>>> My family rented the apartment for 2 years, saved up a little more money, and gave up the plan to buy the apartment then we moved to a happy duplex.
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