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When I was young, I used to expect to eat out or delivery food. Because then, my mom cooked always and sometimes I felt to eat another special food. But nowadays as I live myself and don\'t cook, eat out very often. So I prefer to eat at home. I miss home-made cook more. Because although a meal which I eat outside is convinent and delicious, it is too strong-tasting and high-calory. I worried about my health.
Nowadays I try to cook a meal which is made easliy myself like sandwich or pasta.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for a very detailed overview of your daily life, and intertwining it well with your question. You did a good job giving me a background of your life, so I could better understand why you prefer eating at home. Bravo!
~T.Harmony <3
>> ...to eat out or eat delivery food.
Because then, my mom cooked always and sometimes I felt to eat another special food.
>> ...and I sometimes felt like eating another kind of special food.
But nowadays as I live myself and don\'t cook, eat out very often.
>> But nowadays, as a person who is living by herself and doesn\'t cook, I tend to eat out quite often.
So I prefer to eat at home.
>> CORRECT!
I miss home-made cook more.
>> I miss home-cooked meals a lot more.
Because although a meal which I eat outside is convinent and delicious, it is too strong-tasting and high-calory.
>> ...outside is convenient and delicious, the flavor is too strong and high in calories. (The correct spelling of \"calory\" is calorie\")
I worried about my health.
>> I\'m worried about my health.
OR>> I worry about my health.
Nowadays I try to cook a meal which is made easliy myself like sandwich or pasta.
>> Nowadays, I\'ve been trying to cook meals which I can easily make myself like a sandwich or pasta.
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