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2023-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elea

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WRITING TASK: Do you think people’s musical preferences reflect their personalities? Why or why not? I don\'t think so. Some people is a quiet people who likes loud music, and it also exist the opposite case. And the preferences for music can change, but it doesn\'t change every time.

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Thank you for being consistent in making your homework, Jessica. I like reading your thoughts and it makes me really happy that you are improving your writing skills. Please keep it up! ^^
~T. ELEA

A: I don\'t think so. Some people is a quiet people who likes loud music, and it also exist the opposite case. And the preferences for music can change, but it doesn\'t change every time.
>> I don\'t think so. Some people are quiet people who like loud music, and it also exists the opposite case. And the music preferences can change, but it doesn\'t change every time.

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