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2023-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jhozel

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Do you ever reject an invitation to a party? If so, Why? I refused to attend a university party after finishing semester.I heard they would drink too much alcohol that party, so I didn\'t go party.

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Good morning, Dan!
Good job! Thank you for writing your homework! 
Your sentences are getting better and better keep it up! 
-T.Jhozel 
Do you ever reject an invitation to a party? If so, Why?
I refused to attend a university party after finishing semester.
>> I refused to attend a university party after finishing the semester.
I heard they would drink too much alcohol that party, so I didn\'t go party.
>> I heard they would drink too much alcohol at that party, so I didn\'t go.

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