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2023-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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The daily plan allows me to accurately check what I have to do that day, and it becomes a habit so that I can envision when and how to do it when a special situation arises in my daily life. I think that by making a plan, daily life is not disrupted, and it is efficient to move in order. And by checking my daily life, I can know what kind of life I am living, and I can praise myself for being well and rewarding in my daily life.

강사 첨삭

Hello again, Eliana!
Thank you for this! I agree with your thought, planning makes you more productive.
Have a good afternoon.
Aki~

The daily plan allows me to accurately check what I have to do that day, and it becomes a habit so that I can envision when and how to do it when a special situation arises in my daily life.
>>> CORRECT!

I think that by making a plan, daily life is not disrupted, and it is efficient to move in order.
>>> CORRECT!

And by checking my daily life, I can know what kind of life I am living, and I can praise myself for being well and rewarding in my daily life.
>>> CORRECT!

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