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2012-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lorraine

학생이 쓴 원문

Thank you. Here are my answers to the questions. Maybe I will become mother ten years from now. I will have husband. I will marry handsome guy. I will have three babies. because i love babies. In the morning for husband go to work, i make cook. In the afternoon, i play with my babies. In the evening my family very happy has dinner.

강사 첨삭

Hi there. We had a nice conversation and I know you are really trying your very best to become better. Keep it up! You know that I will be here always in case you have queries or questions. Looking forward to our next class! ^__^

T. Lorraine

Thank you. Here are my answers to the questions.

>> Correct! ^__^

Maybe I will become mother ten years from now.

>> Maybe I will become a mother ten years from now.

I will have husband.

>> I will have a husband.

I will marry handsome guy.

>> I will marry a handsome guy.

I will have three babies. because i love babies.

>> I will have three babies because I love babies.

In the morning for husband go to work, i make cook.

>> In the morning, before my husband goes to work, I will cook for him.

In the afternoon, i play with my babies.

>> In the afternoon, I will play with my babies.

In the evening my family very happy has dinner.

>> In the evening, my family will be very happy for dinner.

>> In the evening, I will make dinner for my family for them to be very happy.  

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