homework
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i think one of the most a problem of art is price.
it reduce that the price of art.
this is a way that it take down a burden on people.
if the price is reduced ,it generate accessibility.
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i think one of the most a problem of art is price.
>> I think one of the most noticeable problem in art is the price.
it reduce that the price of art.
>> We could reduce the price of artworks.
this is a way that it take down a burden on people.
>> This way, it could take down the burden of the people.
if the price is reduced ,it generate accessibility.
>> If the price is reduced, it would generate accessibility.
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