homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The first, I want to live with a girl i love
The second, Anyone it\'s possible to come in my house like a tree that people can avoid sunlight and rain.
Tthe third, Big or small is not important to me. If i can sleep, eat a food, feel happy it\'s enough.
강사 첨삭
Hello!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework! This kind of activity helps you to stay on track. Make English speaking and/or writing a daily habit of yours. It only seems impossible until it’s
done! So have faith you’ll be better. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!
Regards,
Teacher Lexie
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The first, I want to live with a girl i love.
>> First, I want to live with the girl I love.
The second, Anyone it\'s possible to come in my house like a tree that people can avoid sunlight and rain.
>> Second, everyone is welcome to my house to find shelter. It is like a tree that gives protection against sunlight and raindrops.
The third, Big or small is not important to me. If i can sleep, eat a food, feel happy it\'s enough.
>> Finally, how big or how small the house is, is not important to me. If I can sleep, eat, and feel happy in it, it\'s enough.
The second, Anyone it\'s possible to come in my house like a tree that people can avoid sunlight and rain.
>> Second, everyone is welcome to my house to find shelter. It is like a tree that gives protection against sunlight and raindrops.
The third, Big or small is not important to me. If i can sleep, eat a food, feel happy it\'s enough.
>> Finally, how big or how small the house is, is not important to me. If I can sleep, eat, and feel happy in it, it\'s enough.
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