homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I need to take a nap and sleep in.
sometimes I used to take a nap.
But i heard that the long time sleeping is bad for the health of people.
So i have to reduce sleeping.
강사 첨삭
Hello!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework! This kind of activity helps you to stay on track. Make English speaking and/or writing a daily habit of yours. It only seems impossible until it’s
done! So have faith you’ll be better. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!
Regards,
Teacher Lexie
I need to take a nap and sleep in.
>> CORRECT!
sometimes I used to take a nap.
>> Sometimes I take a nap.
But i heard that the long time sleeping is bad for the health of people.
>> But I heard sleeping for to long is bad for our health.
So i have to reduce sleeping.
>> So I had to reduce my sleeping hours.
>> CORRECT!
sometimes I used to take a nap.
>> Sometimes I take a nap.
But i heard that the long time sleeping is bad for the health of people.
>> But I heard sleeping for to long is bad for our health.
So i have to reduce sleeping.
>> So I had to reduce my sleeping hours.
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