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2023-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

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Do you think you have habits that annoy other people? I think I don\'t have this kind of habits. I already explained that I usually keep guidelines of all. I usually try to keep them and I ask others to keep them too. There are things you need to do, but sometimes you don\'t have to do like brushing your teeth If we don\'t brush our teeth every day, our teeth will rot, So I constantly nag. It is my bad habit.

강사 첨삭

I do have a lot of bad habits that (in my idea), annoys people. 
1. I shake my legs. (If you notice, it seems that my screen is always moving, this is the reason.) 
2. I do not finish my coffee. ( My cup was never empty. ) 
3. I stay in the toilet for almost 30 minutes. ( I usually bring my phone. haha )

Andrea 

I think I don\'t have this kind of habits.
>> I think I don\'t have any bad habits. 

I already explained that I usually keep guidelines of all.
>> I already explained that I follow all guidelines. 

I usually try to keep them and I ask others to keep them too.
>> I usually follow then and I ask others to follow them too. 

There are things you need to do, but sometimes you don\'t have to do like brushing your teeth. 
>> There are things that you need to do such as brushing your teeth but sometimes, you don\'t do it. 

If we don\'t brush our teeth every day, our teeth will rot, so I constantly nag.
>> Correct 

It is my bad habit.
>> That is my bad habit. 

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