homework
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What comes to mind when you hear the word “joyride”?
I think joyride is problem of society. The goverment need to restrict their cofu[이름]g activity to makes world better place.
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What comes to mind when you hear the word “joyride”?
I think joyride is problem of society. The goverment need to restrict their cofu[이름]g activity to makes world better place.
>> I think joyride is a problem in society. The government needs to restrict their cofu[이름]g activity to make the world a better place.
OR: I think that the joyride is a societal issue. To make the world a better place, the government should limit confu[이름]g activities.
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