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2023-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elea

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Q: Do you think that Instagram has a responsibility to combat cyberbullying and other forms of online harassment on its platform? A: I think Insatagram do not have that much responsibility, but I think they have some. I think they don\'t have that much responsibility because the platform is not made for those online harassments. But I think they need to ban the people who do those things.

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Great work, [이름]! You\'re always making me proud by being consistent in answering your homework. Please keep up the good work! ^^
~T. ELEA

A: I think Insatagram do not have that much responsibility, but I think they have some. I think they don\'t have that much responsibility because the platform is not made for those online harassments. But I think they need to ban the people who do those things.
>> I think Instagram does not have that much responsibility, but I think they have some. I think they don\'t have that much responsibility because the platform is not made for those online harassment. But I think they need to ban the people who do those things.

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