Homework
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Q: What are your thoughts on the role of Instagram in politics and the spread of political ideas?
A: I think some people on the Instagram share their thoughts about their country\'s politics.
Then other people who read the posts can know about their country\'s politics, and that can make them to know about political ideas.
And I think it can make people to solve the political problems too.
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Great work, [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts honestly about the homework. Please keep up the good work! ^^
~T. ELEA
A: I think some people on the Instagram share their thoughts about their country\'s politics. Then other people who read the posts can know about their country\'s politics, and that can make them to know about political ideas. And I think it can make people to solve the political problems too.
>> Some people on Instagram share their thoughts about their country\'s politics. Then other people who read the posts can know about their country\'s politics, which can make them know about political ideas. And I think it can cause people to solve political problems too.
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