homework
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I heard that no eating food is very effective as a diet.
but there is a problem.
If i have a diet that i don\'t eat food i can\'t earn a necessary nutrient.
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I heard that no eating food is very effective as a diet.
>> I heard that not eating any food is a very effective diet.
But there is a problem.
>> CORRECT!
If i have a diet that i don\'t eat food i can\'t earn a necessary nutrient.
>> If I have this kind of diet, I won\'t have the necessary nutrient that my body needs.
But there is a problem.
>> CORRECT!
If i have a diet that i don\'t eat food i can\'t earn a necessary nutrient.
>> If I have this kind of diet, I won\'t have the necessary nutrient that my body needs.
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