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2023-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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Among the people I haven\'t seen in a while, the ones I want to see are the parents of the school my second daughter attended before moving in. She feels better when you have a conversation with her. We used to meet often even after we moved, but these days it\'s hard to see each other because we\'re busy. She works as a forest commentator.

강사 첨삭

Eliana!
it really feels great when you have someone to talk to, whether a friend whom you just met but have a great connection with and a friend you really long to talk with. Thank you for this!
Aki~

Among the people I haven\'t seen in a while, the ones I want to see are the parents of the school my second daughter attended before moving in.
>>>  Among the people I haven\'t seen in a while, the ones I want to see is one of the parents at the school my second daughter attended before moving in.

She feels better when you have a conversation with her.
>>> It feels better when I have a conversation with her.

We used to meet often even after we moved, but these days it\'s hard to see each other because we\'re busy.
>>> CORRECT!

She works as a forest commentator.
>>> CORRECT!

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