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What I want to happen in my life is to travel around the country for a month in a camper with my family.
Furthermore, I study English hard, speak a foreign language wonderfully, and travel abroad with my family.
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Eliana,
What I want to happen in my life is to travel around the country for a month in a camper with my family.
Furthermore, I study English hard, speak a foreign language wonderfully, and travel abroad with my family.
Having a month vacation with your loved ones would be one the best things that could happen to your life. I hope you\'ll be able to have that.
Enjoy the rest of your day :)
T. Aki~
What I want to happen in my life is to travel around the country for a month in a camper with my family.
>>>> CORRECT!
Furthermore, I study English hard, speak a foreign language wonderfully, and travel abroad with my family.
>>>> CORRECT!
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