homework
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If you were to run a shop that would be open 24/7, what would you sell?
I will sell variety snacks and alcohol. I think many people would buy snacks and alcohol any time.So I could raise my sell.
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If you were to run a shop that would be open 24/7, what would you sell?
I will sell variety snacks and alcohol.
>> I plan to sell a variety of snacks as well as alcohol.
I think many people would buy snacks and alcohol any time.
>> Correct!
OR: I believe that many people would buy snacks and alcohol at any time.
OR: I believe that many people would buy snacks and alcohol at any time.
So I could raise my sell.
>> Correct!
OR: So I could increase my sales.
OR: So I could increase my sales.
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