Homework 13
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What do you think of this statement: A man should have a wife for the family and a mistress for pleasure.
A. If there are people who believe this statement I would never talk to them. I hate the fact that some people have this idea and take it for granted. Especially men who have high authority are likely to carry out this statement by themselves. In this month, the mayor of Seoul which means he had a huge power in Korea committed suicide. Because the fact that he had continued sexual harassment to his staff for several years was exposed to public on that day. Before the accident, he had been recognized as the strongest candidate for the next presidency. Through this accident, I realized that there are many hidden dark places under power following this statement.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bomi! Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this one. It is really disheartening to know that the people who hold so much power would take advantage of their position and disregard the rights of those under them. It\'s hard to phathom that a man in such stature would commit something as immoral as this! I hope this will be an eye opener for them! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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I hate the fact that some people have this idea and take it for granted.
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Especially men who have high authority are likely to carry out this statement by themselves.
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In this month, the mayor of Seoul which means he had a huge power in Korea committed suicide.
>>In this month, the Seoul mayor who held great power committed suicide.
Because the fact that he had continued sexual harassment to his staff for several years was exposed to public on that day.
>>For the fact that he sexually harassed his staff for several years was exposed to the public on that day.
Before the accident, he had been recognized as the strongest candidate for the next presidency.
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Through this accident, I realized that there are many hidden dark places under power following this statement.
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