Homework 13

ESSAY: What Korean product would you like to be internationally promoted? Why? I would like to promote Hanbok, Korean traditional clothes(dress). Hanbok is very colorful and beautiful, but it is very hard to see people wearing Hanbok because western clothes became very popular and common. Koreans only wear this Hanbok when they have official events such as marriage, traditional holidays, and fashion shows. Hanbok covers the shape of bodies so you don't need to care of your body shape. This gives you comfort when you move. Koreans do not usually wear Hanbok even in special events these days. I hope people all aroudnd the world to know the beauty of Hanbok.

Hi there [이름]!^^ I am a Filipino yet I love looking at girls who wear the Hanbok. It\'s so pretty and I wish I get the chance to wear one in the future. I do hope you idea could be promoted!^^ Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I would like to promote Hanbok, Korean traditional clothes(dress). >> I would like to promote Hanbok, the Korean traditional clothes(dress). Hanbok is very colorful and beautiful, but it is very hard to see people wearing Hanbok because western clothes became very popular and common. >> Hanbok is very colorful and beautiful, but it is very hard to see people wearing the Hanbok because western clothes became very popular and common. Koreans only wear this Hanbok when they have official events such as marriage, traditional holidays, and fashion shows. >> CORRECT OR> Koreans now just wear on for special occassions.Hanbok covers the shape of bodies so you don\'t need to care of your body shape. >> Hanbok covers the shape of bodies so you don\'t need to care about your body shape. This gives you comfort when you move.  >> CORRECT OR> It is more comfortable to move with it.Koreans do not usually wear Hanbok even in special events these days. >> Koreans do not usually wear Hanboks even in special events these days. I hope people all aroudnd the world to know the beauty of Hanbok. >> I hope people all around the world would know the beauty of the Hanbok.