homework 13

2016-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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What are the negative results, if any, of being an overachiever? I supposed the word overachiever's mean is the newly rich. If someone be an overachiever, they have to worry about managing their wealth. Because, they didn't earn the money and use its scale before. So their wealth may be go away for consuming the money too fast. Then they could be a beggar. Also, there is a crisis of personal relations. If you have huge money, variety of people come to you for the money. Then you cannot help struggle to save your wealth form the people. Therefore, the situation will be more worse than you haven't the money.

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Hi there my dear Sun, happy Monday!Thank you so much for sending this in... I really appreciate your time and effort in doing so. I hope you will keep up the good work... Take care always and have a great day... xoxoTeacher Cam^^ What are the negative results, if any, of being an overachiever? I supposed the word overachiever\'s mean is the newly rich.>>I supposed the word overachiever means the newly rich.If someone be an overachiever, they have to worry about managing their wealth.>>If someone is an oevrachiever, they have to worry about managing their wealth.Because, they didn\'t earn the money and use its scale before.>>correctSo their wealth may be go away for consuming the money too fast.>>So their wealth may go away for spending much.Then they could be a beggar.>>They could turn rags from riches.Also, there is a crisis of personal relations. >>correctIf you have huge money, variety of people come to you for the money. >>correctThen you cannot help struggle to save your wealth form the people. >>correctTherefore, the situation will be more worse than you haven\'t the money. >>Therefore, the situation will worsen.

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