Homework#13
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, teacher! Today is sunday noon... Did you have a good day? I had a pretty good day because I met my girlfriend in three weeks.
I ate some delicious food and watched movie that is \"EXIT\". It was exciting. Oh, And i bought English book \"the old man and the sea\"
Anyway, Here is my homework.
Essay: Describe your most annoying habit.
My annoying habit is that I often use \"anyway\" , in korean \"아무튼\", when I converse with my friends
Whenever I use that word, I think this conversation frequently breakaway from the topic.
Although I don\'t want to say that, I always get into that habit.:(
So these days, I try to take 3 seconds before speaking.
I believe this will break the habit.
This is my annoying habit.
So, what about you? when we have a class , I want to hear your things.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jonathan!
Happy Monday.
Nice to hear about your story.
Is \'EXIT\' a horror movie?
Anyway, here are my corrections.
My annoying habit is that I often use \"anyway\" , in korean \"아무튼\", when I converse with my friends
>>My annoying habit is that I often use \"anyway\", in Korean \"아무튼\", when I converse with my friends.
Whenever I use that word, I think this conversation frequently breakaway from the topic.
Whenever I use that word, I think this conversation frequently breakaway from the topic.
>>Whenever I use that word, I think this conversation frequently breaks away from the topic.
Although I don\'t want to say that, I always get into that habit.:(
Although I don\'t want to say that, I always get into that habit.:(
>>Although I don\'t want to say that, I always get into that habit.
So these days, I try to take 3 seconds before speaking.
So these days, I try to take 3 seconds before speaking.
>>Correct!
I believe this will break the habit. This is my annoying habit.
I believe this will break the habit. This is my annoying habit.
>>Correct!
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