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2023-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I think a neighbor who respects each other\'s privacy is a perfect neighbor. I don\'t think it\'s good to be too kind, and it\'s not good to appeal only to your own discomfort without listening to the other person\'s story. When I lived in an apartment before, some neighbors were friendly with each other, but one day I was uncomfortable because they made a burdensome request, and some neighbors didn\'t listen when I explained that it wasn\'t our family\'s fault, and only got angry at themselves. I think it\'s good to keep a certain distance, be polite, and be close.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Eliana!
I would agree with you, being close to neighbors is like giving them an opportunity to meddle or pry with your affairs. I always get a bad impression form my neighbor that I am the exact opposite of my mom who is friendly and approachable. IN other words, people are afraid of me. haha!
Have a good afternoon.
Aki~

I think a neighbor who respects each other\'s privacy is a perfect neighbor. 
>> CORRECT!

I don\'t think it\'s good to be too kind, and it\'s not good to appeal only to your own discomfort without listening to the other person\'s story.
>> CORRECT!

When I lived in an apartment before, some neighbors were friendly with each other, but one day I was uncomfortable because they made a burdensome request, and some neighbors didn\'t listen when I explained that it wasn\'t our family\'s fault, and only got angry at themselves.
>> CORRECT!

I think it\'s good to keep a certain distance, be polite, and be close.
>> CORRECT!




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