Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: Which artists/bands do you want to see at a music festival?
A: The artist that I want to see at a music festival is Loy Kim. I love him. His voice is beautiful. His [이름]s relieve my stress.
강사 첨삭
Hello!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework! This kind of activity helps you to stay on track. Make English speaking and/or writing a daily habit of yours. It only seems impossible until it’s
done! So have faith you’ll be better. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!
Regards,
Teacher Lexie
Q: Which artists/bands do you want to see at a music festival?
A: The artist that I want to see at a music festival is Loy Kim. I love him. His voice is beautiful. His [이름]s relieve my stress.
A: The artist that I want to see at a music festival is Loy Kim. I love him. His voice is beautiful. His [이름]s relieve my stress.
>> CORRECT! GOOD JOB!
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