Homework
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Q: Do you believe accidents can be completely avoided, or are they inevitable?
A: I think accidents cannot be completely avoided but I think they can be mostly avoided.
Every person cannot be completely perfect, but if they always be careful, they can mostly avoid the accidents.
But I think it\'s not easy to avoid a lot of accidents by myself.
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Good Thursday, [이름]! I am happy to have your homework again. You did well in expressing your thoughts about the question. Please keep up the good work! ^^
~T. ELEA
A: I think accidents cannot be completely avoided but I think they can be mostly avoided. Every person cannot be completely perfect, but if they always be careful, they can mostly avoid the accidents. But I think it\'s not easy to avoid a lot of accidents by myself.
>> I think accidents cannot be completely avoided but I think they can be mostly avoided. Every person cannot be completely perfect, but if they are always careful, they can avoid accidents. But I think it\'s not easy to avoid a lot of accidents by myself.
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