Homework
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Q: Do you think the snack industry should be more transparent about its ingredients and manufacturing processes? Why or Why not?
A: I think the snack industry should be more transparent about it\'s ingridients.
Maybe, for some people, the ingridient would not care a lot, but for some others, they care a lot about the ingridients in the snack.
So, I think it\'s not bad to be more transparent about that.
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A: I think the snack industry should be more transparent about it\'s ingredients. Maybe, for some people, the ingridient would not care a lot, but for some others, they care a lot about the ingridients in the snack. So, I think it\'s not bad to be more transparent about that.
>> I think the snack industry should be more transparent about its ingredients. Maybe, for some people, they don\'t care about the ingredients, but for others, they care a lot about the ingredients in the snack. So, I think it\'s not bad to be more transparent about that.
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