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Most people live by looking at other people\'s eyes.
If you live as you please, you may cause harm to others.
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Most people live by looking at other people\'s eyes.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Most people live by the preference of others.
If you live as you please, you may cause harm to others.
>>> CORRECT!
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