Homework
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One of the hottest trends these days seems to be the Internet of Things (IoT).
This year, the smart home has been applied more to our lives.
My house also has a new air conditioner, and it is possible to control the temperature outside the house, so it is safe even if there are only pets in the house.
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One of the hottest trends these days seems to be the Internet of Things (IoT).
>>> CORRECT!
This year, the smart home has been applied more to our lives
>>> CORRECT!
My house also has a new air conditioner, and it is possible to control the temperature outside the house, so it is safe even if there are only pets in the house.
>>> CORRECT!
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