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2023-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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HOMEWORK for 07/11 Write 5-8 sentences TOPIC: Describe the best trip that you had. What did you do? Who did you go with? How did you feel? If I remember my best trip is japan in last year with my girlfriend because originally I like a lot of things in japan food,scene and ditance. we went many place and take picturs we ate many kind of foods I feeld so good

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Good day, [이름] [이름]! You did really well in answering this homework. I am so proud of your effort and improvement in sharing your ideas using better sentences. Let\'s keep on doing exercises like these so that you can continue developing your skills further. ~ T. Marie ^^

If I remember my best trip is japan in last year with my girlfriend because originally I like a lot of things in japan food,scene and ditance.

>> As far as I can remember, the best trip I had was when I went to Japan with my girlfriend.

>> Originally, I like a lot of things in Japan, like food, the scenery, and even their distance.
we went many place and take picturs

>> We went to many place and took pictures.
we ate many kind of foods

>> We ate many kinds of food.
I feeld so good

>> I felt so good.

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