Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, T. Faith.
How was your day?
There was an important meeting at lunch time.
Since a little water leaked from the ceiling at the clinic, we tried to find out the exact reason.
Hence, I called many people; our interior design boss, upper floor inteior design boss, leakage expert, building guard, and building company boss.
After we discussed about this problem, we concluded that the upper floor inteior team made a mistake.
This was a third time, so I was mad.
I told the interior boss, who takes part of upper floor, that he should solve this problem.
Do you have a child?
I have three daughters; 9, 7, and 5 years old.
To spend more time with them, I am considering to buy a game console like Nintendo.
What do you say to this?
About my assignment, I always think that more punishment should be required about driving.
Driving a car needs much responsibility for others.
As I said this morning, drunk driving is more dangerous.
Many people die for it everyyear.
Can you drive?
See you.
강사 첨삭
It seems that there are always unexpected happenings every day. I hope it can be fixed immediately. In fact, I am still learning how to drive now and still having a hard time. I wish I could get a hang of it soon. Stay safe!-Faith-
Hello, T. Faith.>> CORRECT
How was your day?
How was your day?
>> CORRECT
There was an important meeting at lunch time.
There was an important meeting at lunch time.
>> There was an important meeting at lunchtime in our office.
Since a little water leaked from the ceiling at the clinic, we tried to find out the exact reason.
Since a little water leaked from the ceiling at the clinic, we tried to find out the exact reason.
>> CORRECT
OR We tried to investigate the water leak from the clinic ceiling.
Hence, I called many people; our interior design boss, upper floor inteior design boss, leakage expert, building guard, and building company boss.
>> CORRECT
After we discussed about this problem, we concluded that the upper floor inteior team made a mistake.
After we discussed about this problem, we concluded that the upper floor inteior team made a mistake.
>> After we discussed this problem, we concluded that the upper floor interior team made a mistake.
This was a third time, so I was mad.
This was a third time, so I was mad.
>> This was the third time, so I was mad.
I told the interior boss, who takes part of upper floor, that he should solve this problem.
I told the interior boss, who takes part of upper floor, that he should solve this problem.
>> CORRECT
OR I told the interior boss, who is in charge of the upper floor, to fix it as soon as possible.
Do you have a child?
>> CORRECT
I have three daughters; 9, 7, and 5 years old.
I have three daughters; 9, 7, and 5 years old.
>> I have three daughters; nine, seven, and five years old.
To spend more time with them, I am considering to buy a game console like Nintendo.
To spend more time with them, I am considering to buy a game console like Nintendo.
>> CORRECT
What do you say to this?
What do you say to this?
>> CORRECT
About my assignment, I always think that more punishment should be required about driving.
About my assignment, I always think that more punishment should be required about driving.
>> About my assignment, I always think that more serious punishment should be required for driving.
Driving a car needs much responsibility for others.
Driving a car needs much responsibility for others.
>> CORRECT
As I said this morning, drunk driving is more dangerous.
>> CORRECT
Many people die for it everyyear.
Many people die for it everyyear.
>> Many people die because of it every year.
Can you drive?
Can you drive?
>> CORRECT
See you.
See you.
>> CORRECT
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