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Q: Do you think men should wear jewelry or accessories? If so, what type?
A: I think they can just decorate themselves with their styles.
Every people in the Earth has different styles, and they wear clothes with their own fashion.
And, it also applied in accessories.
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A: I think they can just decorate themselves with their styles. Every people in the Earth has different styles, and they wear clothes with their own fashion. And, it also applied in accessories.
>> I think they can just decorate themselves with their styles. Every people on Earth has different styles and they wear clothes in their own fashion. And it is also applied to accessories.
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