homework
학생이 쓴 원문
TOPIC: Describe that most recent vacation that you had.
Where did you go?
Who did you go with?
What did you do?
What did you enjoy the most?
Would you like to go back there again?
I went to jeju island in most recent with my friends we did a lot of things like paragling, riding a hores, fishing in sea and even climed hanla mountain.
among them i most like is climed mountain
I didnt enjoy because its so hard
but it is most remember
I dont want to go back there again :)
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I went to jeju island in most recent with my friends we did a lot of things like paragling, riding a hores, fishing in sea and even climed hanla mountain.>> In my most recent trip, I went to Jeju island with my friends.
>> We did a lot of things such as paragliding, riding horse, fishing in the sea, and even climbing Hanla Mountain.
among them i most like is climed mountain
among them i most like is climed mountain
>> Among these things, I really liked climbing the mountain.
I didnt enjoy because its so hard
I didnt enjoy because its so hard
>> I didn\'t enjoy it because it\'s too hard.
but it is most remember
but it is most remember
>> But it is what I remember the most.
I dont want to go back there again :)
I dont want to go back there again :)
>> I don\'t want to go back there again :)
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