homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) We read BOOKS. - noun
2) She RIDES a horse. - verb
3) My PARENTS are nice. - noun
4) They play the DRUMS. - noun
5) He often HELPS his brother. - verb
I planned my trip schedule yesterday.
But I didn't decide whether I go to the seaside or I go to a shopping to the mart yet.
I want to do all but I don't have enough time.
I didn't also decide whether I rent a bicycle or not.
I will go to Daemado next week. My friend Hye-Jung said to follow me and trust me.
I worry about my trip.
강사 첨삭
Hello my dear Miss. [Name], happy Monday!
Thank you once again for a job well done composition...
I\'m hoping that though you don\'t have enough time you will enjoy your time with your friend..
I can\'t wait to talk to you again my dear..
Teacher Cam^^
1) We read BOOKS. - noun
>>correct2) She RIDES a horse. - verb
>>correct3) My PARENTS are nice. - noun
>>correct4) They play the DRUMS. - noun
>>correct5) He often HELPS his brother. - verb>>correctI planned my trip schedule yesterday.
>>I planned my trip itinerary yesterday.But I didn\'t decide whether I go to the seaside or I go to a shopping to the mart yet.
>>But I haven\'t decided yet if I will go to the seashore or go shopping.I want to do all but I don\'t have enough time.
>>correctI didn\'t also decide whether I rent a bicycle or not.
>>correctI will go to Daemado next week. My friend Hye-Jung said to follow me and trust me.
>>I will go to Daemado next week and my friend Hye Jung said he will follow me.I worry about my trip.
>>correct
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