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2012-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) We read BOOKS. - noun 2) She RIDES a horse. - verb 3) My PARENTS are nice. - noun 4) They play the DRUMS. - noun 5) He often HELPS his brother. - verb I planned my trip schedule yesterday. But I didn't decide whether I go to the seaside or I go to a shopping to the mart yet. I want to do all but I don't have enough time. I didn't also decide whether I rent a bicycle or not. I will go to Daemado next week. My friend Hye-Jung said to follow me and trust me. I worry about my trip.

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Hello my dear Miss. [Name], happy Monday! Thank you once again for a job well done composition... I\'m hoping that though you don\'t have enough time you will enjoy your time with your friend.. I can\'t wait to talk to you again my dear.. Teacher Cam^^ 1) We read BOOKS. - noun >>correct2) She RIDES a horse. - verb >>correct3) My PARENTS are nice. - noun >>correct4) They play the DRUMS. - noun >>correct5) He often HELPS his brother. - verb>>correctI planned my trip schedule yesterday. >>I planned my trip itinerary yesterday.But I didn\'t decide whether I go to the seaside or I go to a shopping to the mart yet. >>But I haven\'t decided yet if I will go to the seashore or go shopping.I want to do all but I don\'t have enough time. >>correctI didn\'t also decide whether I rent a bicycle or not. >>correctI will go to Daemado next week. My friend Hye-Jung said to follow me and trust me. >>I will go to Daemado next week and my friend Hye Jung said he will follow me.I worry about my trip. >>correct

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