Homework
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Q: Do you believe that one’s appearance affects how they are treated by others? Why or Why not?
A: I think usually appearance affects how they\'re treated.
Because, when a person meets someone for a first time, they can\'t know their characteristics, so they first look at ther appearance.
But if a person knows their characteristics, he wouldn\'t care a lot about the appearance.
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A: I think usually appearance affects how they\'re treated. Because, when a person meets someone for a first time, they can\'t know their characteristics, so they first look at ther appearance. But if a person knows their characteristics, he wouldn\'t care a lot about the appearance.
>> I think appearance usually affects how they\'re treated. Because, when a person meets someone for the first time, they can\'t know their characteristics, so they first look at their appearance. But if a person knows their characteristics, he wouldn\'t care much about their appearance.
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