Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello.
Since there were a lot of works, I had a hectic day.
I am a doctor and also a boss.
As for all treatments, there should be a doctor.
In addition, as a boss, I have many paperworks like administration, labor, tax, and so on.
Meanwhile, we had a meeting for the water leakage accident.
The interior company boss, who is in charge of this accident, came to our clinic and promised that he will fix all problems about his mistakes.
Without a guarantee, we can\'t believe him.
Hence, I asked him to write down the guarantee, and he accepted it.
Actually, our clinic moved to this current place around 4 months ago.
In spite of new interior construction, there are several defects to be seen.
Back to my homework, I think that the previous president Moon is the most controversial politician ever.
Most right wing people thinks him as a man who has no ability and who loves North Korea and China than our country.
On the contrast, most left wing people always think that he was a perfect president.
강사 첨삭
I hope your hectic day yesterday meant productivity, Dr. [이름]! Indeed, when that time comes that the interior company boss completes his job at your clinic then it will be a relief on your part.-Faith-
Hello.>> Hello!
Since there were a lot of works, I had a hectic day.
Since there were a lot of works, I had a hectic day.
>> Since there was a lot of work, I had a hectic day.
I am a doctor and also a boss.
I am a doctor and also a boss.
>> CORRECT
As for all treatments, there should be a doctor.
As for all treatments, there should be a doctor.
>> CORRECT
In addition, as a boss, I have many paperworks like administration, labor, tax, and so on.
In addition, as a boss, I have many paperworks like administration, labor, tax, and so on.
>> In addition, as a boss, I have much paperwork like administration, labor, and tax.
Meanwhile, we had a meeting for the water leakage accident.
Meanwhile, we had a meeting for the water leakage accident.
>> CORRECT
The interior company boss, who is in charge of this accident, came to our clinic and promised that he will fix all problems about his mistakes.
The interior company boss, who is in charge of this accident, came to our clinic and promised that he will fix all problems about his mistakes.
>> The interior company boss, who is in charge of this accident, came to our clinic and promised that he would fix all problems about his mistakes.
Without a guarantee, we can\'t believe him.
Without a guarantee, we can\'t believe him.
>> CORRECT
Hence, I asked him to write down the guarantee, and he accepted it.
Hence, I asked him to write down the guarantee, and he accepted it.
>> CORRECT
Actually, our clinic moved to this current place around 4 months ago.
Actually, our clinic moved to this current place around 4 months ago.
>> CORRECT
In spite of new interior construction, there are several defects to be seen.
In spite of new interior construction, there are several defects to be seen.
>> In spite of the new interior construction, there are several defects to be seen.
OR Despite the new interior construction, we notice that the building has different structural problems.
Back to my homework, I think that the previous president Moon is the most controversial politician ever.
Back to my homework, I think that the previous president Moon is the most controversial politician ever.
>> Back to my homework, I think that the previous president, Moon. is the most controversial politician ever.
Most right wing people thinks him as a man who has no ability and who loves North Korea and China than our country.
Most right wing people thinks him as a man who has no ability and who loves North Korea and China than our country.
>> Most right wing people think him as a man who had no ability and who loved North Korea and China more than our country.
On the contrast, most left wing people always think that he was a perfect president.
On the contrast, most left wing people always think that he was a perfect president.
>> In contrast, most left wing people always think that he was a perfect president.
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