homework
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Q : Environmental issues such as climate change have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A: I think, I agree up to 50%
Because, strong punishment is not the only way to solve problems.
Even If the governments are imposing harsh punishment against offenders, if they still don’t think seriously about environmental problems, the environment will still be destroyed. Therefore, I think there are moral and also individual problem.
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A: I think, I agree up to 50%.
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OR >>> I agree to some extent.
Because, strong punishment is not the only way to solve problems.
Because, strong punishment is not the only way to solve problems.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Even if the governments are imposing harsh punishment against offenders, if they still don’t think seriously about environmental problems, the environment will still be destroyed.
Even if the governments are imposing harsh punishment against offenders, if they still don’t think seriously about environmental problems, the environment will still be destroyed.
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Therefore, I think there are moral and also individual problems.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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