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Thank you. I don't agree this opinion, Because money need us. We buy all object for money. Maybe a evil person use poisonously money.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday. It was so nice talking to you again. I had fun and thank you for sharing some of your information. Your speaking skill is good but we have to practice more of your grammar and pronunciation. See you tomorrow my dear. :)
~T. Lorraine~
Thank you. I don\'t agree this opinion, Because money need us.
>> Thank you. I don\'t agree on this opinion because money needs us.
We buy all object for money.
>> We can buy all objects because of money.
Maybe a evil person use poisonously money.
>> Maybe an evil person can be poisoned by money.
>> Maybe an evil person can use money poisonously.
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