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The Penguin Village in Yanglim-dong, Gwangju is not recommended.
There are restaurants and cafes in Yangnim-dong, so you can go there at least once, but I don\'t recommend it as a place to visit again.
This is because it is a village decorated with waste household items, but there is a story of living in a village that was destroyed by a big fire a long time ago, but it is not pretty.
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Eliana!
Thank you for this and I guess people try not to go to this place or hopefully they would be able to do some improvements to attract both local and international tourists.
Have a great day!
Aki~
The Penguin Village in Yanglim-dong, Gwangju is not recommended.
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There are restaurants and cafes in Yangnim-dong, so you can go there at least once, but I don\'t recommend it as a place to visit again.
>>> CORRECT
This is because it is a village decorated with waste household items, but there is a story of living in a village that was destroyed by a big fire a long time ago, but it is not pretty.
>>> CORRECT
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