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I can’t drink well.
But I like drink with my friend when we take a trip or special day.
Draft beer is the best and soju is the worst.
Because soju make me get drunken easily.
If I get drunken I fell asleep.
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Hello, Ms, [이름]ny! ^^
How do you behave when you\'re drunk? haha
Thank you for sharing this, I hope to read more of your stories.
Have a great day.
Aki~
I can’t drink well.
>>> CORRECT!
But I like drink with my friend when we take a trip or special day.
>>> But I like to drink with my friend when we take a trip or special day.
Draft beer is the best and soju is the worst.
>>> CORRECT!
Because soju make me get drunken easily.
>>> Because soju makes me get drunk easily.
If I get drunken I fell asleep.
>>> If I get drunk I fell asleep.
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