homework
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HOMEWORK for 07/19
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What form of public transport do you usually use? What can you say about it? Is it expensive or cheap? Do you like taking it?
I usually use to subway because I have to something a lot that I go to seoul. Our city\'s subway is have been developed to seoul. Its price is not bad. I like use to subway in summer because its cool.
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I usually use to subway because I have to something a lot that I go to seoul. >> I usually use the subway when I have to do a lot of things in Seoul.
>> OR I usually take the subway when I have to do a lot of things in Seoul.
Our city\'s subway is have been developed to seoul.
>> Our city\'s subway has been developed, and is now connected to Seoul.
Its price is not bad.
>> CORRECT
I like use to subway in summer because its cool.
>> I like to use the subway because it\'s cool.
>> OR I like to ride the subway because it\'s cool.
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