homework

2023-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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HOMEWORK for 07/20 Write 5-8 sentences TOPIC: Do you like taking a plane? Why or why not? I like taking a plane. because there is mean that I leaving for somewhere. As I sad before I very like travel to anywhere but among them most like is travel to another country then I have to using a plane to another country

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Good morning, [이름] [이름]. You worked hard in answering the homework I gave you this week. Good work! Let\'s continue to enhance your skills further by having more practice in the class. I\'ll see you there! ~ T. Marie ^^ 
I like taking a plane. 
>> CORRECT
because there is mean that I leaving for somewhere.
>> Because it means I\'m leaving to somewhere. 
As I sad before I very like travel to anywhere but among them most like is travel to another country
>> As I said before, I reallly like to travel anywhere. 
>> But what I like the most is traveling to another country. 
then I have to using a plane to another country
>> Then, I have to take the plane to another country. 

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