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I felt a sense of pride at the company\'s 10th anniversary event last year.
For some reason, I felt like I was growing as much as the company grew. When I first joined the company, there were 29 employees, but now there are 70.
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Hello [이름]!
Congratulations! I guess this is one of the milestones a company can be proud of. Despite the challenges and troubles, the company is growing and helping people fin jobs and enjoy their products and services. HAve a great day!
Aki~
I felt a sense of pride at the company\'s 10th-anniversary event last year.
>>> CORRECT!
For some reason, I felt like I was growing as much as the company grew.
>>> CORRECT!
When I first joined the company, there were 29 employees, but now there are 70.
>>> CORRECT!
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