Homework
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What’s the most expensive meal you’ve had at a restaurant?
-> Last year, when my birthday, me and my family went to go beef restaurant. There is the best beef but it is so expensive.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Jenny! It\'s your birthday so I guess it\'s okay to treat yourself with expensive beef.
Last year, when my birthday, me and my family went to go beef restaurant.
>>>> Last year, on my birthday, my family and I went to a beef restaurant.
There is the best beef but it is so expensive.
>>>> There, they had the best beef but it was so expensive.
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