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2023-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I like kind of in smartphone video and game. First I like video more to game. Second funny game is very exciting.

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I like kind of in smartphone video and game.

>>> What I like about my smartphone is that I can play video games.

First I like video more to game.

>>> First, I like video games very much.

Second funny game is very exciting.

>>> Second, playing games is very exciting.

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