homework
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HOMEWORK for 07/21
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: Which public transport do you think is the safest to take? Why do you think so?
I think safest teansport is the bus because I saw the news what showed accident a lot amond them at least there are little injury people from bus accident but it is dangerous too
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I think safest teansport is the bus because I saw the news what showed accident a lot amond them at least there are little injury people from bus accident but it is dangerous too.>> I think the safest transport is the bus.
>> I saw a news that showed an accident where at least three people were injured.
>> But I think bus is dangerous, too.
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