Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If someone celebrates me with food and drinking.
I will be happy.
There aren’t many people to celebrate to others good fortune.
If you have friends who can share your pleasure honestly .
You have succeed in your life.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]ny!
Given a chance to be merry, enjoy it with friends or people you love!
Have a great day!
Aki~
If someone celebrates me with food and drinking.
>>> CORRECT!
I will be happy.
>>> CORRECT!
There aren’t many people to celebrate to others good fortune.
>>> There aren’t many people to celebrate with others for good fortune.
If you have friends who can share your pleasure honestly.
>>> CORRECT!
You have succeed in your life.
>>> You have succeeded in your life.
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